Girl with Dog Minus Dog

Heres my second attempt at colouring. It's the girl from the girl with dog sketch. uhh not so happy with my colour choices and the more I work on it the less I like it so it's gonna leave it at least for now. I have an alternate version b/c at one point I was like wow that bow is not attached to anything so the other version makes more sense. So tell me which you people prefer. and yea critiques plz.